Love never gives up
Do
you ever read something and you can almost feel it hitting you? I was reading
and I came across this verse:
Love
never gives up, never loses faith, is always hopeful, and endures through every
circumstance.1 Corinthians 13:7.
This
really hit me while I was reading. I mean it says love never fails.
It never loses faith. It always hopes and it endures though every
circumstance.
We
have this love living inside of us. We can show a love that never fails. All we
have to do is ask God to help us.
I
was writing today and was experimenting with single sentence dialogs and no dialog tags, and it ended up I got on this topic. I hope y'all enjoy.
Where to next?
The
post office.
You’ve been there a
lot lately.
I’ve
been getting a lot of correspondence.
No you haven’t.
There
will be more soon.
You are a hopeless
dreamer.
Perhaps
I like it that way.
She will not be
writing to you again.
You
don’t know that.
I know what I see.
You
will be seeing different soon.
You’re a fool.
I
know.
Why don’t you just
give up?
I
will never give up on love.
Why not?
Because
I know it is worth it.
How?
A
very dear friend told me it was.
Was that same friend
the one who stopped writing you?
Yes.
Then you are a bigger
fool then I thought.
Probably.
She didn’t take her
own advice, why should you?
Because
I love her.
She gave up on love.
But
I won’t give up on her.
But she doesn’t love
you.
Perhaps.
Just give up.
No.
It’s not worth it
anymore.
Love
is always worth it.
Are you sure?
Yes.
Even when it hurts
you?
Even
then.
I cannot change your
mind?
No,
you can’t.
Then I shall take you
to the post office.
Thank
you.
I still think you’re
a just a dreamer.
I
know.
But I hope it turns
out well.
I
appreciate it.
One last thing.
What?
How long has it been
since you heard from her?
Ten
years.
Then I was right.
What?
You’re a fool.
Perhaps.
I like this post Mikayla! :D That dialogue is fun. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I enjoyed writing it. =)
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Mikayla. This is so good. I don't have words to say how right this is, even when it hurts.
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed all of your writing I've read, but you are clearly maturing and growing stronger. You have a real skill and gift that shines brightest when you're communicating God's love in story.
If this was growing, it came with growing pains, as it usually does. Thank you.
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This was so cool! :D
ReplyDelete*Sunny
Thank you! I apreachite you taking the time to read it!
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That dialogue is great.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of the Bible passage of the old woman- Anna?- who was a prophet and living in the temple just waiting to see Jesus.
I love the expectation and hope than the character has in the dialogue, just like the woman in the Bible waited a long time. It says to me that there are certain things worth waiting for, worth believing in even when it seems unreasonable.
Thank you, Kate!
DeleteHum! I hadn't thought of that! I'll have to go back and read that passage! =D
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! It ment a lot to me!
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Loved that dialogue! It was a really unique way to explore the crazy concept of love! Thanks for sharing with us.
ReplyDeleteThank you! It is pretty crazy to think about, isn't it? I'm so glad we have an amazing God to help us out!!
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-Mikayla-