Writing Wednesday #27

My Camp NaNoWriMo project

Its CampNaNoWriMo. This is one of my favorite times of year because it means I get a lot more writing done then usual. This year has been especially awesome because I was invited into a cabin with some other Christian bloggers and it has been awesome!

I am actually writing Just Your Ordinary Messenger, which I have shared the beginning to before, but I re-wrote it, so I thought I would share it again. Forgive the grammar errors, please, this is its rough draft! Please comment and tell me what you think of it!

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I wasn’t sure where I was. I felt disorientated and foggy. It was like I was coming out of a very deep sleep. I was sore, and stiff all over, like I hadn’t moved in a long time. Slowly my senses came back and I because aware of the fact that I was in a car, though I hadn’t ventured to open my eyes yet, the familiar sensation was unmistakable.

Where am I? I asked myself, surprised that I couldn’t at once recall. I wracked my brain, trying to remember where I had last been.

I was with Matt. I thought He was taking me to A.C.T. wasn’t he? I must still be in his car, though I don’t even remember falling asleep.

I opened my eyes, but was startled to be met by blackness. My heart rate quickened, why can’t I see? I moved my hand to touch my eyes, but found myself unable to move them as well. I could now hear my heart beating I was beginning to get so scared. What is going on? The frantic thought wouldn’t stop racing through my head, not matter how I tried to stop it.

“Are you sure she won’t remember any of what happened?” A male voice penetrated the silence, startling me almost so bad that I jumped, but I managed to stop myself. I didn’t recognize his voice.

“I told you sir, she won’t remember any of it for a long time. Long enough for you to make a clean getaway.” A second, younger man replied.

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What did you think?